徐来 发表于 2020-3-22 11:20:46

博艺美育与春天有个约会

菜花金灿灿，蜂蝶吻其间，
引来看春人，欢笑声儿响，
佳人观其景，才思如涌泉，
吟把春来唱，搁笔诗如舞。
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博艺户外体验园的春天，春色满园惹人笑
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yj00 发表于 2020-3-22 14:30:05

博艺美育是啥？

游山虎 发表于 2020-3-22 15:05:32



谁不说俺家乡美？诗情画意处处春。楼主这首美诗，若能更改几个字，读起来会更上口些。

泰来 发表于 2020-3-22 21:20:15

游山虎 发表于 2020-03-22 15:05
谁不说俺家乡美？诗情画意处处春。楼主这首美诗，若能更改几个字，读起来会更上口些。

欢笑声儿颠   搁笔舞翩翩，改一下这两句读起来就顺口了，不过诗有千秋各凭己意，https://deey.app1.magcloud.net/public/emotion/face_074.png

游山虎 发表于 2020-3-22 23:05:28

泰来 发表于 2020-03-22 21:20
欢笑声儿颠   搁笔舞翩翩，改一下这两句读起来就顺口了，不过诗有千秋各凭己意，

菜花金灿灿，蜂蝶吻其间。
引来踏春客，欢声笑语甜。
佳人观美景，才思似涌泉。
吟把春来唱，搁笔诗成篇。

这么改一下可否？


村夫 发表于 2021-1-8 08:50:20

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